Special FeaturesWelcome to the place where we examine treasures brought back from beyond the map's edge. This time: a fantasy short story by Rebecca LuElla Miller. Be sure to look at the bottom of this page for a listing of our previous special features. Swallow and BeyondBy Rebecca LuElla Miller
As the egg-shaped
ship drifted toward Swallow’s shore, Rhei jostled to get a better
view—past a mother with her baby nestled in a sling, past four or five
tradesmen clustered in front of the tinker’s stand, past a mason repairing
the rocky wharf. Near the water,
she scrunched between barrels of smelly fish parts, instinctively pressing
the back of her hand against her nose to impede the briny odor of decay.
To think, the unfortunates ate this refuse. Hunger must drive a person to
tolerate the intolerable. Tolerate the
intolerable. Didn’t that
describe what Rhei was doing this very minute? To satiate the yearning
that intensified every day, she would endure just about any
unpleasantness. Pressure built
within her chest. In moments she could be feasting on the knowledge she
longed for. Why had these travelers come to Hol? Were they friendly?
Intelligent? Wise? Handsome? What language did they speak? And more
importantly, what did they know about The Beyond? Questions. As
always, her questions stoked the fire within her soul—the fire she lived
with every day despite what others said or did to
her. In childish
naiveté, her first word had been a question. Of course her mother, rather
than praising her achievement, scolded her for her unnatural curiosity.
As Rhei grew, she
realized her questions inevitably brought chastisement, but how could she
quench the burning desire to know? How could she look at the trivial bits
of life without asking why they were? How could she study living things
and not ask what brought them to be? And most especially, how could she
look at the charcoal-gray clouds that sealed the sky and not asked what
existed beyond? Certainly someone
in Hol had to know. She asked her father, but he beat her. She asked the
youth instructor. He excluded her from tutelage. She asked Hol’s Founder,
and the governance passed a resolution banning speculation about The
Beyond. When Rhei asked why, the city
elders threatened her with exile. The local matriarchs ignored her as they
would a crazy person and kept their sons and daughters far from her. Her
own father had disowned her, forcing her to move to a storehouse near the
docks, but it was there she had first heard the
rumor. The strange ship
bobbed past Rhei toward the far berth, not the near one as she expected.
If she stayed here between the barrels she wouldn’t be able to overhear
the strangers or watch them as they came ashore. Bursting from her useless
vantage point, she collided with the Founder, righted herself, then rushed
for a spot near the water. “See here, young
woman.” The Founder’s voice followed her over the stone wharf to the
pulley draw where yardmen worked to secure the strange ship to the port
clamps. Rhei glanced over
her shoulder at Hol’s leader, hoping the gathering crowd would distract
him. He straightened
his spectacles before shouldering past the vegetable venders, his hardwood
boot-heels banging on the stone. “Young woman, I will not have you
upsetting our visitors with your questions.” He held up a hand, stopping
her from responding. “If I so much as hear you ask a question of any kind,
I will bar you from the welcoming ceremonies. Should the arbiter declare
your action to be willful, I’ll ban you from the city.” Without waiting
for a reply, he swung toward the disembarkation plank. Situating himself
in front, he fingered the collar of his tawny shirt, then each of his
vest’s shiny brass-leaf buttons. Rhei collapsed
onto a fisherman’s bench. Not ask questions? Not ask strangers about their
strange clothing, speech, gestures, habits? Not ask what they knew about
the rumored fire beyond the clouds? Here, about to step off this odd ship,
was someone who could ease this incessant pressure inside her, and she was
not allowed to ask questions? As Rhei stared at
the bobbing vessel, a weathered seaman, spry for someone so wrinkled and
gray, bounded from the cabin and hoisted himself to the disembarkation
plank. He raised both hands, pivoting in a slow circle. When he again
faced the crowd assembled on the wharf, he smiled. “Greetings from Tonum.”
His voice was steady, though his deliberate pronunciation carried a slight
accent. “I bring the good people of Swallow a present.” He gestured toward
a pile of boxes stacked near the plank. “May our two nations live in
harmony.” The Founder
squinted through his spectacles. “Harmony! Nothing has changed that I am
aware of to alter Swallow’s age-old harmony with all our
neighbors.” Rhei snorted.
“Because we have no contact
with our neighbors.” Glaring at her,
the Founder addressed the seasoned seaman still perched on the
disembarkation plank. “Dismiss whatever this one says to you, traveler.
She borders on becoming an unfortunate, and I’m sure you know how
unconventional that lot is.” The traveler
strode down the plank, but instead of stopping in front of the Founder,
looking him up and down, and telling him what a distinguished figure he
was and how privileged Hol was to have him guide the city into the future,
he angled toward Rhei. “I’m sorry,” he
said, at last shifting his gaze to the Founder, “what are the
unfortunates?” The fishermen,
venders, matriarchs, and elders lingering within earshot
gasped. The traveler
scanned their faces. “Have I said something to offend
you?” Puffing up like a
blowfish, the Founder smoothed down the front of his shirt. “Your first
visit to Swallow. Of course, our ways and customs and people are all new
to you. The unfortunates are of no consequence. What a finely tailored
suit of clothing you’re wearing. I’ve long admired
linen.” The traveler
studied his long-sleeved shirt, then his trousers as if he’d forgotten
what he was wearing. “If you like, I’ll have one of the lads fetch my
spare uniform. You’re welcome to it.” He turned toward his ship and
beckoned. “I would not have thought successful merchants such as
yourselves had a lack of goods.” “Certainly, sir,
we do not.” The Founder’s resemblance to a blowfish was more pronounced
than before. Rhei hid a smile
with a wide yawn, covering that with her hand. A buoyant youth
appeared at the traveler’s side, listened to a muffled command, and
scurried back to the ship. “He’ll have that
spare uniform here for you in no time.” “Why, I … the
idea. Sir, I assure you, I am not an unfortunate and have no need of any
of your clothing. Keep your spare uniform. Or you may wish to
wear it yourself at your welcoming ceremony.” “A ceremony. What
an honor.” One corner of the older man’s mouth turned
up. “Of course.”
“What time will
this welcoming take place?” Eyeing the
traveler as he would a pile of dung he needed to step around, the Founder
massaged the loose skin beneath his chin. “All gatherings begin at the
lighting of the lamps.” The traveler
glanced at the low cloud cover. “Might turn dark soon, with a sky like
this.” The Founder
stepped back. “At the lighting of the lamps, sir. And I trust your vessel
will be underway on the morrow at the earliest hour.” He spun from the
traveler and marched toward town, his nose high enough to test the
wind. The crowd—the few
people who didn’t bolt at the stranger’s first question—dwindled into the
gathering shadows. With a shrug, the
traveler flashed a bewildered grin in Rhei’s direction. “Was it something
I said?” “Most Swallowites
don’t like questions.” With a finger, she traced a miniscule fissure in
the fisherman’s bench. The creases
between the traveler’s graying eyebrows deepened, and he sidled in front
of her. “No questions? How can anyone learn if they don’t ask
questions?” Rhei scooted to
the edge of her seat. “That’s what I think, too.” “Ah, a harmonious
spirit.” The aging seaman’s grin widened. He glanced past her toward the
center of town. “Too bad, since I’ll be leaving on the morrow. I could
have learned a great deal about Swallow from you.” “There’s not much
to learn. What you see here in Hol is a picture of the entire
nation.” Reaching for the
railing that marked the edge of the wharf, the traveler leaned back. “But
there’s the problem. I won’t be in Hol long enough to see much of
anything.”
Rhei’s fingers
drummed a steady rhythm beneath the bench. The Founder had forbidden her
to ask questions, and he had an uncanny way of discovering noncompliance,
but maybe, just maybe she could still learn about these Tonumians without
asking questions. “Perhaps I can help you learn what you want to
know.” His gaze shifted
toward her frayed shawl. “For a fee?” “Of sorts. You
ask me what you want to know. After I answer, you give me the same
information about Tonum.” “That’s all you
wish?” “That’s more than
I could dream.” “Then I agree.”
With a nimble spring, he perched on the rail, his back to the sea. “Is it
true Swallow has always been at peace with its
neighbors?” “We cannot
quarrel with people we never contact.” She leaned forward. “Your
turn.” “Tonum has been
in many wars, mostly with Cadreel in the south.” He peered into Rhei’s
eyes as if reading her unspoken question, then added, “They attack us
because they wish to appropriate the tableland bordering their country.
Now my next question. Why don’t you have contact with your
neighbors?” Rhei
straightened, crossing her arms over her chest. “Unfair. That question has
no equivalent for Tonum.” “Ah, but I
already told you why we have wars.” She nodded,
relaxing her arms and resting her hands in her lap. “I’ll give you that.
Swallow’s overseer—all the governance really—is afraid of …
controversy.” “Controversy?” “It’s sure to
come. Generations past, Swallow nearly destroyed itself with a civil war.
Contact with other peoples is certain to stir up the disagreement
again.” “What
disagreement?” In the deepening
gloom, Rhei glanced over her shoulder. A shadowy figure moved toward the
nearest lamp, and a flame flickered, then flared inside the bulbous globe
atop the post. “You should go. The welcoming celebration is about to
begin.” “So soon? But you
still haven’t told me what caused Swallow’s civil
war.” “I’ll need some
information from you in return.” “Name
it.” “Not now. The
Founder will not tolerate you being late, especially if he learns you were
talking to me.” The traveler
brushed a hand over the gray stubble on his chin. “I thought I’d have more
time to ready myself. It seems your cloud cover has brought an early
night.” Rhei clutched her
hands together. “I’ve waited all my life to speak of these
matters.” “The cause of
your civil war?” She snickered.
“In a way. One faction—the defeated faction—claimed unknowable
knowledge.” “Ah!” He slipped
from his perch. “Knowledge about …” “The
Beyond.” “Beyond
what?” “Beyond the
clouds.” “You mean,
knowledge about the sun?” Rhei gasped.
“Then it’s true!” “Your people
don’t know about the sun?” “Some of us—maybe
most of us—have heard the rumors.” He rested his
elbows on the rail and leaned back. “But you don’t believe
them.” “You’re saying
you do.” “They aren’t
rumors. The sun exists.” “And you have a
reason to believe such a wild claim.” “I’ve seen it.
All Tonumians have.” “You’ve seen the
fiery ball hanging over your heads! You must be
terrified.” He chuckled.
“When you say it like that, I suppose we should be, but no, we’re not.
When you see it every day, I guess you take it for
granted.” Once again
crossing her arms, Rhei studied the traveler’s face for any hint of
deception. “You see beyond the clouds every day. That couldn’t be
possible.” “Most days Tonum
is above the clouds.” “Above! So
you see…” “The sun dancing
across a sky the color of the mountain iris.” “A blue sky. And
this sun, this ball of fire. You say it sways above your towns, but you’re
not afraid.” The traveler
shook his head. “I don’t think of it as a ball of
fire.” “Then this ‘sun’
is not what we’ve heard it to be.” “Not exactly.
It’s hard to explain. It’s just so bright you can’t actually look at
it.” “You said you’ve
seen it.” Disappointment pinched her tone. “I have.” The
traveler straightened. “Sometimes cloud wisps veil its brightness so you
can look right at it. It’s more like … a bright, round
disk.” Rhei repositioned
her shawl over her shoulders. “Then it’s possible you’re seeing an
allusion, as the disbelievers say.” “People actually
say that?” “Our eyes
can play tricks. If you’ve only seen this disk when it’s
veiled…” “But when the sun
is unveiled, its brightness fills the sky. It outshines every candle and
chases away the dark.” “Dark!” Rhei
looked around at the night gloom. “You shouldn’t keep the Founder
waiting.” “I need to change
into my spare shirt at least.” With a wink and a chuckle, he headed toward
his ship. At the top of the embarkation plank, he glanced back. “Meet me
here after the ceremony so we can finish this
conversation.” Acknowledging his
invitation with a raise of her hand, she swiveled about to see who might
have overheard their exchange. With a wavering flame, the lamp lighter
stretched to the top of the last post at the far end of the lane, his
shadow blending into the dusk. No one else appeared along the walkway—no
one she could see, at least. Keeping to the
darkest side of the passageway, she headed for the Founder’s palace in the
center of town. The citizens of Hol would don their finery and bring their
fanciest fare for the lavish feast. She had no finery and nothing to
contribute to the meal. Still, she could watch the festivities from the
fringe—though her presence there would give credence to the Founder’s
belief that she would soon become an unfortunate. But how could she pass
up the enjoyment of watching the strangers? When she arrived
at the gate, she lingered off to one side until a party of elders and
their families piled out of a carriage. As the servants maneuvered the
vehicle away from the entrance, the gatekeeper shouted directions and
stepped away from his post.
Rhei eased through the gateway. Not that she didn’t belong
at the welcoming ceremony—unless the Founder assessed her demeanor to be
rebellious … or her clothing disreputable…or her stance aloof or… Better if she entered
the common without calling attention to herself. She trailed the
others until they approached the table laden with stuffed pumpkin, curried
shellfish, broiled shark, fried peppers and barley, and a dozen other
tantalizing dishes. As the spicy aromas reached her, her stomach
rumbled. Slipping around a
column, she edged upwind toward the palace grove. No need to torture
herself. Watching the others eat would be hard enough without smelling the
savory food all night. “When does he
want it done?” The gruff voice was so low, at first Rhei wasn’t sure she
heard correctly. Someone else in Hol asking a
question? She melted into
the shadows of a side portico, scrunching between a stairway and another
pillar. Half sitting, half kneeling, she peered toward the sound of the
voice near the tree line. “It should be
done already.” This voice was a mere whisper, maybe another man’s, but
maybe a woman’s. The gruff voice
rumbled, like thunder foreshadowing a storm. “Not my fault. He stayed on
shore instead of returning to his ship.” Rhei clamped a
hand over her mouth to stifle the gasp rising in her throat. This furtive
conversation was about the traveler. The whisperer
snorted. “So a girl scared you off.” Metal grated on
metal, and the tip of a sword showed from behind the trunk of a tree. The
gruff voice hardened. “If you’re challenging my courage …”
“Put that away.
If you still hope to be paid, put it away now.” “I better be
paid.” Once again metal slid across metal, more slowly this time.
“Then finish the
job.” A dark figure
slunk toward the gateway. “I don’t trust
him.” That comment from a surly voice Rhei hadn’t heard
before. The whisperer
murmured something too soft to catch, then added, “He cares nothing about
the rumors.” “We cannot afford
to fail.” “You have a
plan.” A note of
satisfaction crept into the surly voice. “A surprise, shall we say. A
special drink, handed to the traveler by the Founder’s daughter. He dare
not refuse.” The whisperer
sniggered. “That should silence his tongue.” Grass swished,
and the hum of conversation grew fainter. Rhei sagged
against the pillar. Had she really heard a plot to kill the traveler from
Tonum? But why? To keep him from talking about what was beyond the clouds?
That had to be the rumor they alluded to. After all, the dispute about The
Beyond nearly destroyed Swallow before, and beneath the veneer of
meticulous adherence to protocol, strong feelings still raged.
But the traveler
could bring an end to the disquiet by revealing to all of Swallow what
existed beyond the clouds. With his crew to verify what he said, with all
of Tonum, if need be, who could doubt the existence of the fiery ball
beyond? Unless whoever
wanted to kill him aimed to prevent revelation of the truth. Then, killing
the traveler was only the first step in a greater scheme.
One way or the
other, she had to warn him. As Rhei vaulted
for the main gate, the chief steward stepped out onto the portico and blew
the horn announcing the Founder. The servants stopped bustling about. The
citizenry rose to their feet. Rhei slowed, then stopped. She couldn’t
contemptuously ignore protocol without drawing attention to herself. If
they threw her out of the ceremony, she’d never have a chance to warn the
traveler. The Founder
raised a hand to direct the citizenry back to their seats, but paused,
scanning the crowd. “The Tonumians are not among
us.” The steward
shifted from one foot to the other. “They have yet to arrive,
sir.” The Founder
sniffed. “We won’t wait.” “Wait for what?”
The traveler stood just inside the seldom-used eastern gate, his voice
booming across the common. Pivoting toward
him, the Founder clutched his hands behind his back. “Sir, your incessant
questions are rude and tiresome. If it were not for the fact that the
governance of Swallow requires a welcoming ceremony for all travelers, we
would have no more of your company.” As the traveler
moved toward the portico, his crew filed through the gate behind him. “I’m
sorry you feel that way, Founder. I mean no disrespect. In Tonum questions
are not considered impolite.” With a wave of
dismissal, the Founder turned to the steward. “Have them dine someplace
out of my sight.” The steward
scurried down the steps, the lone tuft of hair on the back of his
otherwise bald head flapping behind him. “If you’ll follow me.” He ushered
the Tonumians to a long table near the grove, away from the others. “Sit
here. I’ll see to your meals.” A chill, like a
gust of foggy air, swept over Rhei. With the meal would come the Founder’s
daughter to attend to the guests, the most likely occasion for her to
serve a deadly drink. Rhei had to alert the
traveler. She navigated
around family clusters sprawled on the grass and dodged servants rushing
back and forth to the food table until she reached the isolated strip of
the common. A watchman stepped in front of her. “No one allowed to bother
the Tonumians, child.” With an abrupt
nod, Rhei backed away, pulling her shawl tighter. She glanced around the
common. Servants bustled about the food table, two plates in one hand,
ladling out generous helpings of each dish. Except for the steward. The
plates he prepared held skimpy portions and little meat. When he finished,
he picked his way toward the traveler’s table. Rhei eased in
behind a female servant spooning out curry. She grabbed up two plates from
the stack and ladled out small portions on each. As she made her way
around the end of the table, the steward caught hold of her
arm. “So you’ve
resorted to filching an extra plate of food. Just like the unfortunates.
The Founder was right about you all along.” “I’m not
filching it. I… I thought I could help serve.” “Serve yourself,
no doubt.” He pried the plates from her grip. “Be off. We don’t need the
likes of you.” Rhei started at
his surly tone. As she backed away, she glanced toward the traveler’s
table. A servant set down a jug of wine at the head, another in the
middle. Still no sign of
the Founder’s daughter, though protocol called for her to make her
appearance before the meal was over. There still might be enough time to
warn the traveler, if Rhei could get close. A gust of wind
swept over the common, raining leaves onto the Tonumians’ table—the table
stuck off to the side by the grove. She scrambled back toward the gate and
circled around behind the stand of trees. She reached a spot where she
could see snatches of the diners between the branches, then headed toward
them. Twigs scratched her cheeks and snagged her shawl, but she shook free
and stepped up her pace. Suddenly a hand
caught her by the arm. “Hello, Rhei. I thought we were meeting after the
celebration.” The traveler smiled down at her. “You’re
in danger. The steward… They’re planning to poison your
drink.” He released her
and stepped back. “Why would anyone in Swallow want to harm
me?” She gazed into
his bewildered eyes. “You know the truth about The
Beyond.” “So do all
Tonumians.” “They will never
let you tell the citizens of Hol. Unless you leave now, you and your crew
may not escape alive.” “But if we
don’t drink the wine…” She shook her
head. “There’s an armed man, too. Someone for hire.” The traveler
glanced toward the table near the tree line. “If my men and I leave
together, the Founder is sure to take offense.” The steward’s
horn sounded, and a hush fell over the common. Rhei stretched on
tiptoe and whispered, “He’s about to announce the Founder’s daughter,
assigned by protocol to attend you. The drink she will offer is meant to
silence your tongue.” He nodded, then
mouthed the words, “The armed man?” She pointed in
the direction of the main gate. Conversations
once again hummed around the common. “Then we’ll leave
the way we came. You’ll need to come with us, Rhei.” The traveler reached
for the thin branch blocking their path and pushed it back.
Instead of
passing through the opening, she retreated a step. He motioned her
toward the table. “You can’t stay here, you’ll be at
risk.” “No one knows
that I heard their plans.” Letting the
branch snap back in place, he faced her. “You could see the sun for
yourself.” She shook a
finger at him. “You really don’t compete fairly.” From the common,
the steward’s voice boomed. “The Founder’s daughter must not be kept
waiting. Such an insult. You may as well declare war on our entire
nation.” “Thank you,” Rhei
said. “I will forever picture brightness dancing in a field of blue.” She
sprang through the grove to the Tonumian’s table and snatched up a jug of
wine. Spotting the Founder’s daughter, she sprinted toward her, knocked
the cup from her hand, then veered toward the main
gate. “Stop that girl!”
The steward’s voice again turned surly. Rhei weaved away
from the first man to lunge at her, then ducked behind a food table and
tipped it toward the steward. Dishes clatter together, and food splattered
over the grass. She stole a glance beyond her pursuers. The traveler’s
table was empty. The Founder’s
voice boomed over the chaos. “Bring her to me.” She backed away.
From behind, a provost clamped her arms to her sides. The steward reached
for her. She whipped her foot toward him, catching the meat of his
calf. He
staggered. “Why you…” “Bring her
now.” The provost
hauled her up the steps to the portico overlooking the
sea. With the back of
his hand, the Founder slapped her across the cheek. “You dissident,
disrupting all protocol.” He turned to the steward stumbling up behind
them. “I suppose she was trying to steal food.” “A jug of wine,”
he said, in that same surly voice. “You’ll pay for
embarrassing us like this in front of the Tonumians.” The Founder’s
fingers wandered over the buttons on his vest. “Take her to the
cavern.” As the provost
dragged her away, she strained to look past the Founder to the sea. In the
distance, a line of sailors filed up the embarkation plank while one
released the ropes tied to the port clamps. “Find the darkest
pit to throw her in,” the Founder shouted. “May she rot
there.” Rhei smiled.
She’d start with the provost first, then the guard and the servant that
would deliver her food. If there were other prisoners, she’d tell them,
too, then the arbiter when he reviewed her case. They’d listen, and some
might even believe her. But even if they didn’t, she would always possess
the image of the ball of brightness dancing across the sky, and that was
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